(Scroll down for the first section. This might take me a couple of days, as the response was more enthusiastic than I had expected!)
Valerie, who is curious about my edits, asks, What kinds of notes do they give you? Like global (I think this book should be more about this theme) or detailed (On page 73, third sentence, etc.?)
My edits came in two parts. The first was a marked-up manuscript that targeted specific sentences, word choices, paragraphs, etc. It was SO FUN to read because Erica would write "Ha!" or put smiley faces in the margins when she liked something.
I have the best editor ever.
The second part is an editorial letter that talks about more global things--clarifying and deepening relationships, tightening pacing in the second half, explaining some mythology better, etc. Some of these are pretty specific, but some are more general.
All, by the way, were dead on. I'm really enjoying thinking about it and have mapped out a plan of attack. Working with an editor to make a book you both love even better is, quite simply, a blast.
I'd also love to know what about the letter makes you feel like your editor gets your book and that the changes she suggests will make your book better? Were any of her suggestions things you previously considered? Was anything she suggested a huge surprise?
I've always felt like Erica really "got" my book, if that makes sense. Some of the best parts of her line edits were where she'd say, "This is good, but it doesn't sound like Evie." And she was always right.
And yes, nearly every suggestion was actually something I had already thought about/worked on! She just wants me to dig a little deeper, and I completely agree. So nothing was much of a surprise.
Except when she said she totally had the hots for one of the "bad" characters...hrm...
Okay, that was a lot so I'll stop after just one last question: If I read one of your tweets right, you're giving up Dr. Pepper? Why on earth would you do that??
I like to think of it as giving up on the five extra pounds I'm carrying around.
Janey, my darling Irish friend, asks, If your amazing editor asks you to change something but you don't want to. Do you have to? Is that the deal? Or can you say - I feel strongly such-and-such should stay just as it is? Or is the actual publishing bit dependent on the editor's happiness?
Here's another great thing about my editor: she's always said that if I feel strongly about anything, we'll talk about it. But here's the BEST thing about my editor: I agree with all of her edits, so I don't have to worry about that! I've no doubt that if something were important, or that if I was really passionate about, say, the third line on page 72 that she suggested we cut, she'd give me some leeway.
Anne asks, How do you, er, work your way through (?) the editorial letter?
I read the editorial letter to get an idea of what she was looking for. Then I ignored it and worked my way through the line edits (which allowed me to make some of the small changes she had suggested as I went along). Now that those are finished, I'm re-reading the letter and taking notes. Then I'll tackle one issue at a time, starting smallest to biggest, until I'm done! A couple of scenes need to be rewritten, so I'll probably write those separately and add them in when I'm close to finishing.
And if you were stranded on a deserted island with two books, what would they be?(and don't say one of them is your own, as awesome as it sounds)
I hate these questions with a burning passion. So I'd have to say the Bible, because that's the one book I can't read in a day or two. Then I can rant and rage about the Old Testament instead of, you know, worrying about my own stranded plight.
Ashley asks, So when Hollywood decides to make your book into a movie will you please invite me to your premier bash?
Yes.
Nadine asks, What is your vice?
I procrastinate. A lot. Back in college I had it down to an art--I wouldn't write my five-page-papers the night before, I'd write them the day of.
However, I don't procrastinate my writing anymore. I use it as an excuse to procrastinate everything else...
And if you could travel anywhere in the world, where would you go?
Everywhere. Really, I haven't traveled very much. High up on the list are England, New Zealand (Okay, really I mean Middle Earth. I'll own up to my geekiness right now.), Greece, and Romania.
Good heavens, am I only halfway through? Alright. It's hot, I'm melting, more later!
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Very useful answers... I've had some experience w/ some short stories and editors are amazing at their spot-on-ness...
I've lived in England and was married in New Zealand -- if you're looking for cool Medieval history, obviously, the UK's the place to go, but in terms of sheer natural beauty, NZ's hard to beat.
Can I stow away in your suitcase when you go to middle earth? Pretty please? I'll even bring the chocolate and/or dr. pepper if you haven't managed to give it up!
I've quit Dr. Pepper many, many times. It really isn't that difficult. I wish you the best of luck.
Oh, and congrats on the book deal. I'm new to your blog, but you're a great read.
Yes, come visit New Zealand!
Hmmm. Actually, maybe I should go visit Middle Earth too sometime. That'd be cool. Especially since it's only like 5ish hours' drive away. And they're revamping it all up for The Hobbit now too, but it's still open to visitors (or was, last I heard) :)
good grief, girl. You sound so much like me its uncanny. Except I tackled my edits the opposite of you: big things first, line edits next.
Bane--I'll get to both someday : )
NWA--Of course. But I try to travel with carry-on only, so I hope you're very small.
Renee--Thanks! And the whole quitting many, many times makes me think perhaps it isn't such an easy task...
Ruth--I've wanted to visit there even before it was Middle Earth ; )
Tamara--I thought about doing it that way, but the little red edits on the pages were nagging at me so much I couldn't do anything until I had checked them all off!
I tried DP and quit it straight away. I have not lost an ounce.
Thanks for your answer. I guess the trick is to make sure that the editor and the writer are on the same page. I guess they don't take the gig if they don't love the book in the first place. And what's not to love about Paranormalcy?
I am with you all the way about Middle Earth. if we had the cash NZ would be the destination of choice. I've already been to England but I hear San Diego is real nice...
Haha, the bible, that's a new one!
I'd have chosen the unabridged Oxford dictionary myself - it'd take ages to plow through and if I ever saw a ship sail by, it would burn for days =P.
Muffins and Tizer await, should you ever venture to the UK...
Lots of great info! Thanks for answering my lengthy questions. :) Your edits sound like a lot of fun. Editing is always my favorite part, I think that's when the real storytelling happens.
Congrats on surviving the first day of kindergarten!
For everyone wanting to go to NZ, I definitely recommend it! It's just as fantastic as everyone says :D. Paradise Valley on the north island is "Hobbiton" and Mt. Cook in the South is Caradhras. I think Mt. Doom is in the north, too. Awesomeness!
Also, thank you for the answers on the editing process. It's fascinating to hear how it actually works! :)
Thanks Kiersty-poo! :)
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